My site look ok?

[Jferkin]

http://www.mahonemagic.tk


Is it ok?

Made it cause my science teacher says i should say like

some funny intro
then put hire me at then i just made simple website

(this is for talent show)

[AceOSpades]

http://www.mahonemagic.tk


Is it ok?

Made it cause my science teacher says i should say like

some funny intro
then put hire me at then i just made simple website

(this is for talent show)

i was really dull..kinda

[Jferkin]

i was really dull..kinda

Ya i am still trying to code a few things but cant figure it out....
Just made it last night... Hopefully i can get the code

[Hoax]

I liked the background very much. However, the other things seemed a bit boring in my opinion.. Maybe if you could use some images to spice up your site a bit? You got photoshop so it shouldnt be that hard..

[Jferkin]

I liked the background very much. However, the other things seemed a bit boring in my opinion.. Maybe if you could use some images to spice up your site a bit? You got photoshop so it shouldnt be that hard..

Dont have photoshop anymore

I had a virus... so i got a new computer

[Toxicrafa]

Why do you filme yourself in pajamas?!?! At least get dressed before you go in front of a camera to performe! You won't go to a talent show in your pajamas I guess! But beside this the site looks good.

[Jferkin]

Why do you filme yourself in pajamas?!?! At least get dressed before you go in front of a camera to performe! You won't go to a talent show in your pajamas I guess! But beside this the site looks good.

It was in morning i got bored... Gosh :( lol jk jk haha thanks... Maybe i will do talent show in pajamas.... LOL jk

[Motaz]

Sorry but that was awful and borring.. Try to make cooler design..

[Jferkin]

Sorry but that was awful and borring.. Try to make cooler design..

I didnt make design i just took it off the site..

[deception_artist]

I agree that you shouldn't have a picture of you performing in pj's...nobody will take that seriously:)!! Maybe increase the size of the three main images on the main page, to give it more impact?! And double check the spellings under the 'Hire me' section! Good luck!

[pimpmagic]

Hi, I program websites, and if you need any help you can contact me through PM

[mmagicmman96]

i think it looks pretty cool

maybe a little boring
but i like it:)

[sky_lark]

What style are you going for? If you really want people to hire you, then it needs to be more professional. This is some constructive criticism.

- Take out the games and chat rooms section. SynthaSite is free, so I'm sure you can build another website, make it personal, add games and chat rooms there (I haven't used SynthaSite, so I don't know). Also get rid of the widgets.

- Clean up the text a bit... overall the spelling and grammar is good, but it can be improved. Talk some more about yourself.

- We want to see some more footage. The pajamas are fine, not great, but they're OK. Add in several more videos and pictures... we want to see crowd reactions, and events in which you've performed for (ex. If you're advertising hiring a magician for a birthday party, put up images/video of magic at a birthday party). Also spice up the website a little more.

- Be sure to add the bio and contact info on blank pages, NOT blogs. Many people make this mistake all the time. You want your website to look like it was professionally created, not with a free website builder.

- Lastly, add some more content. Add in some rate quotes, fees, locations, etc. Be kind and specific.

That's about it. Good luck!

[magic freak]

awwwww!!!!!! the mario game is hard! lolz

[Jferkin]

What style are you going for? If you really want people to hire you, then it needs to be more professional. This is some constructive criticism.

- Take out the games and chat rooms section. SynthaSite is free, so I'm sure you can build another website, make it personal, add games and chat rooms there (I haven't used SynthaSite, so I don't know). Also get rid of the widgets.

- Clean up the text a bit... overall the spelling and grammar is good, but it can be improved. Talk some more about yourself.

- We want to see some more footage. The pajamas are fine, not great, but they're OK. Add in several more videos and pictures... we want to see crowd reactions, and events in which you've performed for (ex. If you're advertising hiring a magician for a birthday party, put up images/video of magic at a birthday party). Also spice up the website a little more.

- Be sure to add the bio and contact info on blank pages, NOT blogs. Many people make this mistake all the time. You want your website to look like it was professionally created, not with a free website builder.

- Lastly, add some more content. Add in some rate quotes, fees, locations, etc. Be kind and specific.

That's about it. Good luck!

Ya i am working on the videos... Havnt had any time...

[zachthac]

Ummm i dont mean to pop yur baloon but i seriously dont think ANYONE is going to hire a 10 year old kid to do a gig :/ im not trying to be mean but dont get yur hopes up.