Not polished but i need feedback

[magic_annie]

ok so i know that this performance is awful because i did it very quickly my double lifts were bad because i thought of it in the night and woke up in the morning(very tired btw) and immediately filmed it because i didn't want to forget it, so tell me what you think :)

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[magic_annie]

oh ya i forgot to say, my microphone was broken so thats why i have no sound, also the music was not my choice youtube made me use one of their allowed songs and that was the best one they had.

[AceOSpades]

hey that was prety good!

i diddnt see the ending coming lol

good job annie;) :D

[magick]

looked good to me.....just needs some polish.....

[professor808]

The thing i don't understand is, why do you fake a pass? When you put the duplicate card at the beginning in the center then do a fake pass as if you were using sleight of hand to get it back to the top. What is the point of that? To make them think you used a move. i thought this was supposed to be magic?

A second note, i know you said your double lifts sucked. but i do want to mention that a double lift is supposed to look like when you turn over one card. You turned over one card much differently then when doing your doubles. If you cant make your doubles look like your turning over a single card, try making your singles look like a double.

All in all, the effect to me seemed to much like a red hot mama effect, but good work.

[magic_annie]

The thing i don't understand is, why do you fake a pass? When you put the duplicate card at the beginning in the center then do a fake pass as if you were using sleight of hand to get it back to the top. What is the point of that? To make them think you used a move. i thought this was supposed to be magic?

A second note, i know you said your double lifts sucked. but i do want to mention that a double lift is supposed to look like when you turn over one card. You turned over one card much differently then when doing your doubles. If you cant make your doubles look like your turning over a single card, try making your singles look like a double.

All in all, the effect to me seemed to much like a red hot mama effect, but good work.

like i said before, i can double lift quite weill but i didnt really try on this video becasue i just wanted to get it down so i wouldnt forget, i will post a polished video soon so you know what i mean

[magic_annie]

hey that was prety good!

i diddnt see the ending coming lol

good job annie;) :D

Thanks, i really wanted to fake the spectator out and make em think i was gona do ambitious card but then at the last moment make it change color instead :D ;)

[traumatised-magic]

wasnt too bad, obviously does need some polishin up to get it lookin good, but the overall effect seems ok

there are a few things i would change however

i would personally add an extra phase in to the routine...start it out as a proper ACR and have the red back 2 come to the top then place it back in the deck and have it come to the top once more then get the spec to sign it then do a color change rather than spread thru to find the only blue back card

but thats just me, i prefer tricks a bit more to the point

its a nice effect tho and does remind me of red hot mamacita from penguin

its also nice to see girls gettin into magic, thsi site is usually a male dominated forum so its good to see the girls takin some interest :)

[arsenal09]

that was pretty good, well done.
i really liked this effect and the ending:D

[magic_annie]

ok guys i greatly improved the trick, it makes it a little harder but is far more amazing, i will be postin a video very soon

[professor808]

ok guys i greatly improved the trick, it makes it a little harder but is far more amazing, i will be postin a video very soon

Do tell me you took out the fake pass.

[magic_annie]

Do tell me you took out the fake pass.

i dont know? ;) you will have to wait and see :rolleyes:

[magic_annie]

Do tell me you took out the fake pass.

and honestly there wasnt ever a fake pass, i did not intend to give that impression in the first place. may have looked like it but it was not meant to.

[Dummyisdumb]

and honestly there wasnt ever a fake pass, i did not intend to give that impression in the first place. may have looked like it but it was not meant to.

All that counts is the impression, not what you meant.

[professor808]

and honestly there wasnt ever a fake pass, i did not intend to give that impression in the first place. may have looked like it but it was not meant to.

Well thats why its is good to ask for advice, so we can see what it looks like from someones elses eyes.

[magic_annie]

Well thats why its is good to ask for advice, so we can see what it looks like from someones elses eyes.

Exactly! :)